05 April 2006 @ 09:10 pm
Fic: "The Other Dead" for [info]jaswanson  
Title: The Other Dead
Author: [info]cjmarlowe
Recipient's name: [info]jaswanson
Rating: PG
Character(s): Charlie Weasley, Ron Weasley
Warnings: Character death
Length: 2,500 words
Summary: Witches and wizards were not the only victims of the war with Voldemort.


The Other Dead


He wasn't the one to invent the charm, but Charlie Weasley was one of the first to learn of its existence, and only the third witch or wizard to master it.

Even the Muggles knew that dragons were fearsome creatures, absolutely untameable, wreaking havoc on everything in their path. They could be clever, and they could be cunning, but nonetheless they were beasts and not beings, and could never truly be an enemy or a friend. Charlie had always seen them as beautiful, fiercely independent creatures, worthy of his respect, but he was the first to admit that they did as their nature dictated and no more.

That is, until the communico draconis charm, when suddenly the dragons could understand their keepers.

The reality was that many simply didn't care to listen; still others would understand where to go to eat or drink or breed, and turn their back on all else. But there were a rare few, maybe one in twenty-five by Charlie's count, and probably fewer, who would pay attention to what was being said. Who could fully comprehend what they were being told. Those were the ones, in the end, who agreed to help fight the war.

The first time he saw a dragon go down in battle, Charlie wished he'd never even heard of the communico draconis charm.

"It's getting hot," said Ron, a patently obvious fact which Charlie needn't have been reminded of. "We ought to get started."

Charlie had often imagined the defeat of Voldemort, even before the second war had really got started, when all he had were tales of the first war and his parents' murmurs that Voldemort was not gone for good. There would be fireworks and celebrations, and life would be easy in a way he'd never known it to be.

He hadn't imagined he'd spend the next morning pulling bodies off the Quidditch pitch.

"Has Madame Pomfrey cleared you to work?" he asked his brother, after clearing his throat three times. "You didn't look in a good way, last night." Nor had most of the people Charlie had seen being levitated, carried and sometimes dragged into the Great Hall following the battle. But Charlie's attention had been focused almost solely on his family, what remained of it, until he himself had finally succumbed to desperately-needed unconsciousness.

"Madame Pomfrey's dead," said Ron, and rolled up his sleeves. "This has got to be done." He still didn't look in a good way, but he wasn't wrong.

Charlie felt like he was seeing the damage for the first time, though he'd been in the thick of the battle till the bitter end. It hadn't come down to just Harry and Voldemort, face-to-face for one last confrontation. It had come down to every member of the Order -- and others, many others, who'd flocked to their side -- against every Death Eater, and against every person, every being, who thought that Voldemort led the way to a new world.

Bodies littered the Hogwarts grounds, humans and centaurs and goblins and giants and house-elves. And dragons. Eight dragons had come from Romania to fight with the Order. Only four were going back.

The other survivors, slowly trickling from the comfort of Hogwarts castle into the harsh day, into the aftermath of what'd had to be done, would take care of their friends and families, of all the beings who'd fought bravely the previous night.

And Charlie, well, Charlie knew what he had to do.

"I'm starting at the forest," he said, gesturing for Ron to go the other way. "I'll find you."

"Or I'll find you." Ron looked like he wanted to say something more, and for a moment Charlie thought he might say something about the previous night, about the things he'd seen, the things he'd endured. But then without so much as a wave he turned and started for the pitch.

If Ron had said anything, Charlie would have told him to start somewhere else. Ron didn't need to see the aftermath of Harry and Voldemort's showdown, where in the end no one had walked away, and once he did he wouldn't ever be able to forget. But Charlie knew his brother now, better than he ever had, and knew that Ron would never forgive himself if he didn't try to find his friend.

Charlie didn't wave either as he set off alone for the fringes of the battle, where the first of his dragons had fallen.

The Hebridean Black's name had been Irina, and she'd had a sweet temper, for a dragon. Even before Charlie'd been able to talk to her, she'd been the least likely to spray her keepers with fire when they were trying to untangle her from a poacher's netting charm.

He hardly had to venture into the forest at all to find her, laid out between two oak trees, with a third burnt and crumbled beneath her. He closed her eyes, set a protection charm on her and tried to figure just how he was going to get her out of the woods. Not to mention what he would do with her when he did.

Perhaps she didn't need to be moved; perhaps what he needed to do was bring the rest of the dragons to her. For what better place could he choose to lay them to rest than here in the forest, near to where they'd fought their last fight? The edges of this forest had been where Charlie's love of creatures had been nurtured, the love that had brought him to Romania in the first place, to care for and befriend these very creatures.

He could think of nothing more fitting.

The Welsh Green known as Maurice wasn't even fully-grown. Much like many of the people who'd fought in this battle, including Charlie's own brother and sister. Charlie had wanted to leave him behind, but it was difficult to argue with a dragon, and so Maurice had flown alongside the others, eager to do his part.

Perhaps, flying to Britain again, he thought if they won he would be allowed to go home. If Maurice had survived, Charlie probably would have let him.

The smaller body was easier to move than the others would be. Physically, at least; Charlie couldn't speak for the emotional toll of moving the body of a creature he would have called his friend, levitated high above the heads of the other survivors who worked to find their own dead.

He laid Maurice against the belly of Irina, the irony of which was not lost on him, for in life Maurice and Irina had never got on. At least, if the blasts of fire in each other's direction were any indication.

A second Welsh Green had fallen nearly right on top of the castle, taking a protruding turret with her. Charlie hadn't known her well, if he could be said to have really known any of the creatures. She hadn't been contained in Romania for very long, and Charlie had only spoken to her twice before she agreed to come fight. Perhaps, like Maurice, she had thought of this as being her home territory. Perhaps she'd had other reasons of her own to come, for despite the charm, Charlie would never claim to know the mind of a dragon.

"You there!" he shouted to a skulking figure in black who was prising open the mouth of the dragon. "Be off!"

The figure waved him off and continued on with his task. At least, until Charlie's stunning hex hit him squarely on the shoulder.

"What the bloody hell was that for?" he asked, now propelled a few steps away from the downed creature. "Do you know what those teeth are worth?"

Charlie still had his wand trained on the man as he stalked forward, as intensely as he'd approached any battle during the war. "This dragon was a hero of this battle," he said, pressing on until he was almost at the man's throat, "and I will not have her harvested for parts. Be off!"

The man did take a couple of steps back, but he didn't flee. Charlie thought perhaps he recognised him, a Diagon Alley merchant, but he didn't remember him from the battle. That said, the chaos was enormous, and Charlie couldn't remember everyone. He was not a charitable man, in the aftermath of battle, but he would give the benefit of the doubt.

"There is plenty of work to be done," he said, before the man could put forth any further arguments. "Might I suggest you offer your assistance?"

Charlie didn't know what did it, whether it was the fact that his wand arm didn't so much as twitch, that his eyes showed some of the mania that had possessed him during the battle proper, or whether the man did have a conscience and a sense of duty. Whichever it was, he backed down, raised his palms in a gesture of peace and set off to another part of the grounds.

Charlie hated that he didn't know the dragon's name, but he treated her with the care he had the others, protecting her from further predators and lifting her -- not without some effort this time -- to where the others lay.

The three of them took up surprisingly little space, limp and curled around one another, but it was still a staggering pile of dragon. Charlie had dealt with dragon deaths at the preserve in Romania, such was the nature of life, but the scene here was beginning to overwhelm him, the magnitude of what had happened to them all. The number of deaths, the number of injuries, the number of lives irrevocably changed.

He made his way out of the forest again and as far as Hagrid's hut before losing what little breakfast he'd managed to get down in the middle of his pumpkin patch. And there he sat on the steps of the hut for a long while before he managed to get himself to his feet again and continue with his self-imposed task.

Charlie had been surprised when a Horntail had agreed to join the fight, but Bruce had turned out to be one of the fiercest fighters Charlie had ever seen. He certainly had been a fighter when they'd had him in Romania, too combative to even be considered for use in the Tri-Wizard Tournament, those years ago.

He was older than the others, scarred heavily before he'd ever been brought to Romania. Charlie would never know what prompted him to join the fight, but if he had to guess, it would be that Bruce wanted one last great battle to go out on, instead of wasting away under their care. Of all the dragons they'd brought with them, Charlie was least surprised to see Bruce never leave the battlefield. Bruce never did anything half-hearted.

"Frightening brute, isn't he?"

Ron was nearly next to him, but he still sounded like he was speaking from far away. "He would have been flattered you thought so," Charlie replied after a moment. If Ron was here, then he was no longer scouring the pitch. And if he was no longer scouring the pitch, then.... "Did you find...?" he asked quietly.

He looked over and saw Ron nod slightly, though he never said a word about it, and for the moment remained expressionless. "You looked like you could use a bit of help here."

Charlie swallowed and stared at Bruce's closed eyes a little longer. "I'm going to burn them in the forest," he said finally. "It's what... it's what they need me to do. Burn them to the bones, leave nothing for the collectors."

"They use dragon's blood in a lot of really important potions," Ron offered hesitantly.

"Not these dragons," said Charlie, and turned his wand on the great body before them. He was tired from the others, and his wand arm shook, but he managed to lift the beast in its imperfect repose and begin to move him slowly over the dirty grass.

Then suddenly the load became lighter, not a physical lightening but a mental one. He looked over and saw Ron with his wand raised as well. "Just lead the way," he said, "and I'll follow."

Bruce's body dwarfed the others, though he still looked so much smaller than life as he lay there. At least he'd had a good one, Charlie consoled himself. At least he'd given them all the best life he could have, even if he'd been responsible for bringing them here, to the midst of this war that was not their own.

But they'd chosen, perhaps even more than most of the people who'd fought had chosen, to be here.

"Do you want me to--?" started Ron, but Charlie shook his head.

One by one he set the bodies alight, watching the at-first tiny flames grow and grow, until they became one great pyre, rising to the sky.

There he stayed until they sky grew dark, until that great fire was the only thing they could see. And there Ron stayed, at first by his side and then in his arms, as they paid tribute to more than these magnificent creatures.

There they remembered the friends they had lost in this conflict, the lives that had been altered forever. There they wept for the brother they had lost long before that night, and the brother that had yet to be found. For the family that was broken and would need a great deal of time to heal.

Charlie remembered each of the creatures as he had known them, and the dozens of others he knew he would be returning to, later if not sooner, for these were his charges and his life's work. And whatever anyone else might think of his profession and his priorities, or whether they even thought of them at all, he knew he was doing a good thing.

"They were worth this," he said, as the flames finally died down, leaving a great pile of ash that would nourish the forest, a place Charlie valued more than anyone knew.

Ron nodded at him, and whether he understood or not, Charlie knew that he at least accepted. A few moments later he led the way back to the castle, for there was much work left to be done.
 
 
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Llin: min all the world[info]cosmic_llin on April 5th, 2006 07:21 pm (UTC)
Oh!
This is beautiful - very moving and sad.
And what a fascinating idea to have the dragons join the battle!
Delilah, Miss Dairy Queen 1944: earth and sky[info]cjmarlowe on May 5th, 2006 03:10 pm (UTC)
Thank you very much! :)
Baudrillard: like Bob Ross, in a way: bam by indilime[info]das_kabinett on April 5th, 2006 07:39 pm (UTC)
*sobs*

Oh, lord, I adored this. Poor Charlie, with his loyalty and where that loyalty took the dragons. What a heartwrenching, beautiful story.
Delilah, Miss Dairy Queen 1944: earth and sky[info]cjmarlowe on May 5th, 2006 03:11 pm (UTC)
Thank you! :)
MelusinaHP[info]melusinahp on April 5th, 2006 09:17 pm (UTC)
I don't think I've read a story quite like this before. Really sad and moving.
Delilah, Miss Dairy Queen 1944: earth and sky[info]cjmarlowe on May 5th, 2006 03:12 pm (UTC)
Thanks so much! :)
[info]brandil on April 5th, 2006 11:32 pm (UTC)
Wonderfully heartbreaking.
Delilah, Miss Dairy Queen 1944: earth and sky[info]cjmarlowe on May 5th, 2006 03:12 pm (UTC)
Thank you :)
lookfar[info]lookfar on April 6th, 2006 01:59 am (UTC)
Oh, what a lovely story. I like the way you've chosen to show the breadth of the losses in every war, from Ron's dearest friend to Charlie's charges. It's as if you've taken one little corner of the canon and lifted up the blanket to show what's underneath. It's beautifully written and imagined, as well. How perfect that Charlie would chase a scavanger from the corpse

Well done, jaswanson. I'll be looking for your other work.
lookfar[info]lookfar on April 6th, 2006 02:00 am (UTC)
Oh, well, I've just realized I'll need to wait, won't I? Lucky jaswanson, to receive it.
Delilah, Miss Dairy Queen 1944: earth and sky[info]cjmarlowe on May 16th, 2006 09:20 pm (UTC)
Thank you very much! :) I think it's interesting to figure out what everyone values, and how they'd be most affected by such catastrophic changes.
Danielle[info]dmitchell1985 on April 6th, 2006 02:26 am (UTC)
That was simply stunning. It was chilling, well-paced, well-written, and gave a true sense of what Charlie Weasley might be like as a human being. I enjoyed the descriptions used, because they drew me further into the story you were trying to express.

Lucky recipient. : D

[Here via [info]hogwarts_today]
Delilah, Miss Dairy Queen 1944: earth and sky[info]cjmarlowe on May 16th, 2006 09:31 pm (UTC)
Thank you! I love that this is what fanfiction can do for a character we don't know very well in canon: bring them to life.
I was talking to the goiter[info]gmth on April 6th, 2006 02:27 am (UTC)
This is simply beautiful. So much emotion, and so skillfully presented. My eyes are wet. Thanks for such a great read.
Delilah, Miss Dairy Queen 1944: earth and sky[info]cjmarlowe on May 16th, 2006 09:31 pm (UTC)
Thank you so very much! :)
Story: massiel - clean[info]story645 on April 6th, 2006 03:19 am (UTC)
some rec newsletter

It's not angsty or soppy or depressing. Just I like the very focused, practical, respectful, introspective grieving that the characters do. That the two boys do what they feel they need to, no hysterics or rants or breakdowns, just a cleansing cry at the end. It's different from the usual approach, and it fits the characters brilliantly.


It's cool how you show that these two are brothers. They understand each other enough to give each other the space they need. The quick line that "they'll find each other" after they've started to collect and deal themselves, just speaks volumes about their relationship.


Charlie, you just really fleshed and nailed a character, and used a canon given filter (dragons of course) to do it. Very interesting way of using dragons, and spot on. I like how the dragons are different yet the same and aww, just interesting. They've got more to them then some "human" chars I've seen in fics, and they act as nice mirrors for the human characters, and for Charlies thoughts.


Bringing the harvester into the task shows layers of compassion and bursts of hope, and the respect for the dragons body parts shows a lot of Charlie's respect for everything. You slip what he probably thought of the war into his grieving process, making it come across all the more real, and fleshing him out in the process. I also like the contrast to Ron's very utilitarian "blood is used in a lot of potions" Good insight into Ron's views, again through a simple statement.


Basically, this fic rocks. You packed a lot into short phrases and paragraphs, really making this fic fit and resonate. I'm biased cause I grieve by just going out and doing things, but yeah, from my point of view, you just really laid down how you can start to heal by just dealing with the aftermath.
Delilah, Miss Dairy Queen 1944: earth and sky[info]cjmarlowe on May 16th, 2006 09:39 pm (UTC)
Re: some rec newsletter
Wow, thank you for such a detailed response! I'm so very glad you enjoyed and appreciated the story on this level. :)

The aftermath of war is such rich territory to really dig into characters and see what they're made of. The story was originally conceived as a story about Charlie Weasley and Neville Longbottom (two of the characters from the original request) but Neville became Ron very quickly when I started to feel that including Charlie's family in the story -- his biological family -- was something that was important to the journey he takes.
(no subject) - [info]story645 on May 16th, 2006 10:03 pm (UTC) (Expand)
No Apologies[info]aidenfire on April 6th, 2006 03:21 am (UTC)
:(((

Ohhh. I don't have any words right now.

:(((((((

I might have teared up a little, there.
Delilah, Miss Dairy Queen 1944: earth and sky[info]cjmarlowe on May 16th, 2006 09:40 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much! =) I'm glad it was so affecting.
matildabishop: Ron/Maggie[info]matildabishop on April 6th, 2006 05:54 am (UTC)
Really quite nice. Charlie is laying his dragons to rest, while Ron is doing the same for Harry. You've shown the quieter scene, a somewhat peaceful moment in all the violence and so sad.

Delilah, Miss Dairy Queen 1944: earth and sky[info]cjmarlowe on May 16th, 2006 09:47 pm (UTC)
Thank you. :) After the violence is over, there's still so much left to endure.
consistently inconsistent: love[info]quietliban on April 6th, 2006 07:42 am (UTC)
Oh, this was amazing, quiet, yet very powerful. You almost made me cry.

What I loved most was the simple names of 'Bruce' and 'Maurice' I think that's just too cute.

Well written.
Delilah, Miss Dairy Queen 1944: earth and sky[info]cjmarlowe on May 16th, 2006 09:48 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much! You know, I did think about giving them some more exotic, fierce names, but really it's the dragonkeepers who would have named them, so I decided to keep it basic in the end. :)
cutecoati[info]cutecoati on April 6th, 2006 07:24 pm (UTC)
What an incredibly creative fic, I don't think I've ever read one like that!

Choosing Charlie and his dragons to show the sufferings and losses of the war, only briefly introducing the "other" deaths, is so brilliant an idea it leaves me speechless. And you've struck the right note for it, too, absolutely perfect - neither sappy nor teary, just... perfect.
Delilah, Miss Dairy Queen 1944: earth and sky[info]cjmarlowe on May 16th, 2006 09:50 pm (UTC)
Thank you very much!

The losses of war -- any war -- are almost inconceivable, really. I think breaking it down to one person's losses sometimes says more than trying to understand the overall magnitude of loss.
lazy_neutrino[info]lazy_neutrino on April 6th, 2006 08:14 pm (UTC)
Lovely - and so, so sad!
Delilah, Miss Dairy Queen 1944: earth and sky[info]cjmarlowe on May 16th, 2006 09:50 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
Celestial Navigator: Overwhelmed[info]wook77 on April 7th, 2006 05:13 am (UTC)
This was powerfully moving. It was clear, concise and amazing. There was quite a punch packed into this story.

The loss of a friend, whether "animal" or human is still a devastating loss. You do such a wonderful job at conveying that.

The fact that Charlie grieved just as much for the one he didn't know as the ones he knew so well really cemented your characterization of Charlie for me.

also, the fact that you didn't feel the need to just "toss in" Norbert as one of the dead makes me want to fangirl you something fierce.

Amazing and moving and beautifully done!
Delilah, Miss Dairy Queen 1944: earth and sky[info]cjmarlowe on May 16th, 2006 09:53 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much! Charlie's grief for the deaths of these creatures is so very real, even if the people around him might not understand; grief is such an incredibly personal thing.
Gehayi: ron (koyuuno)[info]gehayi on April 8th, 2006 12:48 pm (UTC)
I never would have thought of using the deaths of dragons to underline the waste of a war.

I felt sorry for Charlie, who had cared for three of the dragons and felt responsible for their deaths. I pitied Ron, for having to bury his best friend. And I loved them both for just going on no matter what, because that was what they had to do.

And I adored Charlie for preventing the dragons from being harvested for parts. There are scavengers on every battlefield, alas, so the fact that Charlie had to intervene to keep the bodies of the dragons safe made a terrible kind of sense.

Excellent piece of work.
Delilah, Miss Dairy Queen 1944: earth and sky[info]cjmarlowe on May 16th, 2006 09:58 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much!

I think part of Charlie's grief is absolutely rooted in the fact that he felt so responsible for what happened to them. He would have grieved for them regardless, but losing them in this way, while he survived, was such a terrible blow. By extension, I think it expresses the grief and survivor's guilt that's felt by each and every person who wakes up at Hogwarts the next morning and has to go on.
[info]hibernater on April 9th, 2006 01:57 pm (UTC)
What makes this wonderful is not the grief that Charlie feels but how justified the grief is. There are choices that have been made here, choices far more altruistic than any human has made on the battlefield, far more principled, and far more tragic in consequence. This wasn't the dragons' war, except that in bringing that to the fore you've reminded us that this shouldn't have been a children's war either, and certainly not one child's war that dragged the whole world in after it. You've piled up the losses far more effectively than any numeration of human victims could do, most especially since that has been done countless times before and the human mind is able to get used to anything, after a while. But this is new, and you've reminded us that the price of war is both incalculable and inevitable.
Delilah, Miss Dairy Queen 1944: earth and sky[info]cjmarlowe on May 16th, 2006 10:00 pm (UTC)
Thank you!

Making choices knowing the possible consequences, and having to make them anyway, might be one of the most terrible experiences of wartime.

Really, you've summed up everything I'd hoped to do with this story far better than I ever could. :)
(no subject) - [info]hibernater on May 16th, 2006 10:07 pm (UTC) (Expand)
lyras[info]lyras on April 10th, 2006 07:24 am (UTC)
Oh my god. I so admire what you've done here: the impact of this story is huge (to me, at least), but it's so quietly done. Just a man clearing away his dead, in the end, but - wow. Sorry, I'm kind of lost for words. Fantastic!
Delilah, Miss Dairy Queen 1944: earth and sky[info]cjmarlowe on May 16th, 2006 10:01 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much! :)
eoR's fangirl: *fangirls*[info]gm_weasley on April 12th, 2006 12:24 am (UTC)
Oh! This is amazing - it's sad and moving, without being remotely soppy or angsty. I loved your Charlie as well, and the fact that he grieves for all the dragons, rather than just the ones he knows. Just...wow :-)
Delilah, Miss Dairy Queen 1944: earth and sky[info]cjmarlowe on May 16th, 2006 10:02 pm (UTC)
Thank you very much! :) I loved having the opportunity to bring some depth to a character that's really only been outlined in canon so far.
[info]mrs_muggle on April 18th, 2006 08:11 am (UTC)
I love the way this is so sympathetic to the dragons, without changing them from the fierce creatures they are in the Potterverse. The relationship between Charlie and Ron is just right, too - like the story itself, understated and totally believable.
Delilah, Miss Dairy Queen 1944: earth and sky[info]cjmarlowe on May 16th, 2006 10:04 pm (UTC)
Thank you! That's something I really struggled with when writing it, actually, keeping the dragons as canon as possible while creating a situation where they would be a valuable asset in wartime. So I'm very glad to know that it worked. :)
Swan[info]jaswanson on April 24th, 2006 12:37 am (UTC)
I've been out of the LJ orbit for quite some time and this post completely slipped by my radar until now, as I have been trying to catch up. So, I really apologize for the tardiness of this reply, mystery author.

I love what you did here. This fic is definitely one of the very best Charlie-centric stories I have read. His grief was tangible and so genuine that I felt deeply saddened, too. You worked to weave his emotions, recollections of the dragon's lives and natures, and the aftermath into an incredible tapestry that I have thoroughly enjoyed reading. Thank you, Mystery Author, for filling my humble request with something so extraordinary.
Delilah, Miss Dairy Queen 1944: earth and sky[info]cjmarlowe on May 16th, 2006 09:35 pm (UTC)
Thank you, and I'm so very glad you liked the story! Exploring the aftermath of the war in this way, exploring grief and family and the things we truly hold dear, is something I love to do, and I'm glad I got the chance to for you. :)

I was actually a little worried at first that it was too dark, and after completing a first draft I was ready to go back and start again, but then I read through a few of the stories you've posted and saw that you hadn't flinched from exploring some similiar themes, so I was really hoping that you would like this one. :)
heidi[info]hidez on May 1st, 2006 11:44 pm (UTC)
ah man - you made me cry.

i love how you made each dragon real, and the effort appreciated. and how you created questions with unanswered answers.

simply beautiful
Delilah, Miss Dairy Queen 1944: earth and sky[info]cjmarlowe on May 16th, 2006 09:50 pm (UTC)
Thank you very much, hon. :)
[info]sibility on May 2nd, 2006 12:15 pm (UTC)
What a decision, asking the dragons to fight -- you've done a wonderful job portraying its outcome and complexity. All the details created such a clear, resonant picture -- one that's definitely still making me think. Great job!
Delilah, Miss Dairy Queen 1944: earth and sky[info]cjmarlowe on May 16th, 2006 10:06 pm (UTC)
Thank you very much! :) That sort of choice, while seemingly straightforward, always does seem to have varied and far-reaching consequences, far beyond the scope of this story, even.
Gnat[info]gnatkip on May 3rd, 2006 06:59 pm (UTC)
OK, I didn't just shed a little delicate tear at the very end; I cried through the whole thing. Very well done. I really enjoyed it.
Delilah, Miss Dairy Queen 1944: earth and sky[info]cjmarlowe on May 16th, 2006 10:06 pm (UTC)
Thank you very much! I have to confess, I did cry a little bit while writing it, which is something I don't think I've ever done before.
Shoeless Girl: medieval trees - blue[info]shoeless_girl on July 7th, 2006 10:41 pm (UTC)
I'm browsing through the list of fics [info]chthonya is collecting for the gen masterlist.

This had me in tears, it was so understated and moving. Carrying on afterwards must be the hardest part of the battle, I think. Beautifully written.
Delilah, Miss Dairy Queen 1944[info]cjmarlowe on July 25th, 2007 10:56 pm (UTC)
Thank you very much! :D
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